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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 28, 2010 19:49:02 GMT -5
( ยป --- Maxwell Victor Taylor ) "Why do I keep doing this? I hate heights but I can't keep away from towers....." NAME: Maxwell Victor Taylor NICKNAMES: Max AGE: 20 GENDER: Male SEXUALITY: Heterosexual CLASS: Proletariat DISTRICT: Eastern
PERSONALITY: Max is a nice guy, plain and simple. He holds the door for people when they walk in a building behind him, he polite and courteous to almost everyone, and he never hesitates to help someone out when he sees them in trouble. He's also rather self-confident, and quick to make a decision. He doesn't make reckless decisions all the time because of this.
Max has a set of morals that he believes very strongly, and he will not violate these morals unless forced to. He is a very loyal friend, and whenever asked for help, he'll do what he can. He prefers to avoid fights, but when it's a friendly tussle for fun, or when he sees it as necessary, he'll fight with everything he's got, just like Scep.
On the more negative side, Max has a horrible temper. He can usually keep rather good control of it so that he doesn't lose control of himself. However, on those rare occasions when it does he nearly goes blind from the anger, almost to the point he doesn't remember what he did while angry.
[/b]: Playing thr drums, which he's been doing for the past 10 years Practicing his free-running skills, which he learned as a child His job as a guard protecting the people of Atlantis. FEARS: Snakes. He's been afraid of them since he was young. Heights, ironically. He has somewhat conquered this fear through his free-running, but occasionally, when he encounters a very long jump or such, the old fear surfaces again. Though not so much a fear as a dislike, Max tends to avoid getting sucked into large gatherings, such as parties, etc, since he dislikes being so closed in by a crowd of people. AMBITIONS: He desperately wants to become Captain of the Atlantean Guard, though he knows it will be difficultdue to his social class. [/ul] COMPANION POKEMON: [/b]: just simply Scep' GENDER: Male NATURE: Brave MOVESET: Leaf Blade, Agility, Double Team, Dragon Claw, Drain Punch,Energy Ball, Frenzy Plant NOTES: Scep and Max are nearly mirror images of each other, personality-wise. Quite frequently, they have the same instinctual action to the same event. [/ul] OTHER INFORMATION: Max has befriended a Gardevoir who he found beaten and abandoned as a kirlia on the streets of the eastern district. He nursed her back to health, and now she lives with him and Scep. She is almost like a second companion to Max, except wwithout the link between the two. She knows Psychic, Double Team, Teleport, and Hidden Power(Ice Type). Also, I finished half of this profile on my blackberry, so if there's any typos/grammar errors/anything wrong, point it out and I'll fix it. It's hard to catch those on one of these things. FACE CLAIM: [b]Fire Emblem[/b], [i]Matthew[/i]Matthew Taylor YOUR ALIAS: Sumdood EXPERIENCE: about 6 or 7 years. HOW YOU FOUND US: adverts. lol. CONTACT INFO: uh...PM, or add me on MSN. use my email in my profile. Also, please SAY you added me from here so I don't wonder who you are? XD lol. [/size][/blockquote]
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Post by JAKOB RAVEN! on Jul 28, 2010 23:05:22 GMT -5
Okay, you have quite a few little things. First off, you need to take the * out of the [code][/code], and you have to fix the ubbc codes in the top thing, where they're a bit wonky. My suggestion would be to re-copy the entire top part from the code again, so you get it perfect (: Also, your personality is a bit short. It doesn't have to be too long (like mine), but it does need more detail, as well as spell-check.
Lastly, you need a 100x100 icon of your character, and the dimensions of the picture you used are slightly wrong. (:
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 28, 2010 23:32:18 GMT -5
Okay, fixed the pictures, and I'm not sure what coding is messed up. It should all be working right. I fennaggled with it for a while trying to work it out rught.
As for the personality, what would you suggest. Normally I would have included the hobbies and stuff in there, but since those are separate sections......
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Post by ASHTON SAY WHAT on Jul 28, 2010 23:51:10 GMT -5
I cannot see the pictures at all, so the coding may be a bit messed up. You're going to have to go to the code, and recopy the part starting with [center] and ending with [/center] at the very top.
As for the personality, you need more detail, and you need negative traits. He's too positive at the moment. Everything about him is good and that's not natural/normal. It should be really simple to fix, but if you have any more questions, go ahead and personal message me (:
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 29, 2010 0:23:41 GMT -5
Okay, fixed. Hopefully that'll fix it.
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Post by JAKOB RAVEN! on Jul 29, 2010 0:45:50 GMT -5
I hate to be completely picky, but your icons at the top need to be 100x100 pixels, otherwise they don't match up quite right. Other than that, you seem good to go
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 29, 2010 5:42:37 GMT -5
Well, I can't find one, becauise I'm stuck on my blackberry until the end of the week, and I can't see image dimensions on it. Didn't you say yyou knew coding to alter image sizes?
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Post by ASHTON SAY WHAT on Jul 29, 2010 16:56:18 GMT -5
I only know coding to make them smaller, making them larger only makes them blurry.
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 29, 2010 19:09:53 GMT -5
than I'm sorry to say that I very well might have to pass on this RP, if my profile gets denied for somethign so small a detail as that. I don't have time to go searching over the internet for a simple little picture. I'm an extremely busy man.
*Shrug* I've always been a firm believer in pictures for a character being optional anyways.
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Post by RYUUSUKE AKAHARI on Jul 29, 2010 19:36:22 GMT -5
http://l-userpic.livejournal.com/15967619/423286 here you go, this one's 100x100. if you use google you can type in the dimensions you want the images to be.
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 29, 2010 19:39:26 GMT -5
thank you. I appreciate it, but that image doesn't work. So, unless something can get worked out, I'm afraid I can't be a part of this RP. I simply don't ahve this much time just to search for a little picture that has no real bearing on the profile itself.
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Post by RYUUSUKE AKAHARI on Jul 29, 2010 19:44:53 GMT -5
http://i29.tinypic.com/2945v6f.png sorry, that was a livejournal pic, and they have an odd format, so it might not have shown up. this one will if the other one won't, it's from tinypic.
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Post by Maxwell Taylor on Jul 29, 2010 19:48:33 GMT -5
ah. thanks. I appreciate it. you're very helpful.
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Post by JAKOB RAVEN! on Jul 29, 2010 19:59:47 GMT -5
( A C C E P T E D ) MAXWELL TAYLOR, proletariat
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